Today Mr. Jabiz is not come to my class. But we also make a poetry from photo that Mr. Jabiz took. This is my poetry again.
Flower and Bee
Flower, flower in daytime
It’s white like cloud in the sky
The sun come up like a lime
Suddenly a bee is fly
That black bee is looks angry
It is angry like a monster
But actually it is kind
It is kind like an angel
Snow in Flower
The color is pink and white
This flowers is like a snow
A cold snow that really beautiful
A white snow like my pillow
Chocolate Soil
Soil, soil in the ground
The color is chocolate
It is like chocolate bar
That I really like
Sweet, sweet like candy
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ReplyDeleteI disagree with your poems because there's not connected your poems with the peace park, example there's no watermelon in the Peace Park.
Is there any watermelon in the Peace Park?
THANKS
Yea.....
ReplyDeleteSorry about it....
I pick the wrong pictures...
I will fix it...