Thursday, March 24, 2011

Editing Grammar For Inquirer Project

Hello again! This project is about editing grammar. After we learn many things about grammar, we should can to editing it. I think I have a lot of mistake in there. I try my best to fix it. Here is my last project;

I was curious about why we can dream when we sleep. I curious about it since I grade 5. At that time, I had a really bad dream or like nightmare. And it's looks really really real for me. I was curious about it because when I dream, I feel it really looks real. Why? Is that real? Is that like we have that moment in the very very long time ago? Sometimes I can have a very good dream and I can have a nightmare. Why it can be happen? And after I dream and I wake up, I can't remember about the dream, just the people that in my dream. I don't know what happen if I dreaming. I also find many people that I never seen before. My friends said "You don't have believe it!". They also said, dream is just what I want, but that was not achieved. So we imagine we have that things, etc. But I also think about it. Even my mother advised me, to not to believe it all. It's just a dream. Not the real one. She often said that. But it rarely helped me. I always try to understand and remember the word that they said to me. But I always remember that nightmare. It makes me afraid.
I also wanted to know where are we if we dream? I am so confused about it. Am I in that place or may be in another place? At the last time, about two weeks or three weeks before, I saw my little brother talk to me but he was still slept. He spoke but it was unclear. And I think some people already feel like that. Even he was walk but he still slept. I called him but he just spoke with unclear while walk to the bed again. I really shocked and also I afraid. I ask my mother what happen, she just said my little brother had a nice dream. He was in really nice place at his dream. I still didn't believe it. Why it can be happen? When we talk or walk when sleep, are we fell it? Why we can't fell it? If I met some people in the dream, is they had a same dream with me, or not? And the last question that I curios is "How can I don't have a dream during I sleep?"
I think that is that I really really curious about. There are some questions that still in my mind. Why? What happen? And where? It's all about dream. If you have the answer that you know, you can comment on my post. I will like to read that because I really confused about it. Thank you. I hope you enjoy!
I make it with 'Sequance' to record the Word Document that I fix the grammar. I also edit the movie with I movie. Here is my video when I edit it;

video


This is my last edit grammar that I made;

I was curious about we dream when we sleep. I was curious about it since I grade 5. At that time, I had a really bad dream or like nightmare. It's looks really real for me. Does that the dream is real? Does the dream is like we have that moment in the very long time ago? Sometimes I can have a very good dream, but I can have a nightmare. Why it can be happen? After I dream and I wake up, I can't remember about the dream, just the people that in my dream. I don't know what happen if I dreaming. I also find many people that I never seen before. My friends said "You don't have believe it!". They also said, dream is just what I want, but that was not achieved. So we imagine we have that things, etc. But I also think about it. Even my mother advised me, to not to believe it all. It's just a dream. Not the real one. She often said that, but it rarely helped me. I always try to understand and remember the word that they said to me. But I always remember that nightmare. It makes me afraid. 
I also wanted to know where are we if we dream? I am so confused about it. Am I in that place or may be in another place? At the last time, about two weeks or three weeks before, I saw my little brother talk to me but he was still slept. He spoke but it was unclear. And I think some people already feel like that. Even he was walk but he still slept. I called him but he just spoke with unclear while walk to the bed again. I really shocked and also I afraid. I ask my mother what happen, she just said my little brother had a nice dream. He was in really nice place at his dream. I still didn't believe it. Why it can be happen? When we talk or walk when sleep, are we fell it? Why we can't fell it? If I met some people in the dream, is they had a same dream with me, or not? And the last question that I curios is "How can I don't have a dream during I sleep?" 
For me, dream is make me really curious about it. There are some questions that still in my mind. Why, what and where does the dream is happen? It's all about dream. If you have the answer that you know, you can comment on my post. I will like to read that because I really confused about it. Thank you. I hope you enjoy!

Monday, March 14, 2011

For Me About Poetry

I learned many things about poetry in my English class, and it was fun. I like to make a poetry now, but not too much. I enjoy when making a poetry. I don't like when I have to read it out loud. I still embarrassed. For me making poetry is interesting. I can write whatever I want. There is no rule for making a poetry. I just make it. I like when I have to feel about the world. I like it because I don't have to think. I just write about anything that I hear, smell, touch, taste and see. This poem is tell me that 'This is your world'.

Last time Mr. Jabiz told us about 'Wall'. I think the wall that mean something that make us hate and feel uncomfortable (embarrassed, shy, etc) when make and read the poetry.  For me, now I can open that half of the wall. Half of it is I still don't want to read it. :)

This is my final poem book that I made. Enjoy!

Final Poem Book


I also not just put the digital poem in PDF, but I cut it and make glue it into another paper and make a book like this: 

This is my final poem book

Sunday, March 6, 2011

Adverb!

Hi! In my ESL class, Mr. Jabiz told us about adverb. Adverb is a word that can describe verb. We did project too. We make a movie with 'dvolver' movie maker. It is fun! We can choose the characters that we want. We also can choose place and the weather.

This is my project! Hope you enjoy!

video

My Shape Poem

In my English class, I made a shape poem. I made about star. It is from 5 words. Hope you enjoy and like it! :)

Check it out guys!

Star!